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On 15th of October the most long-expected, fabulous and outstanding event took place: the Department of Foreign languages of TSPU celebrated its 70th anniversary.This great event gathered students, professors, graduates and a lot of guests.
The students of the department prepared an outstanding performance, that packed the concert hall. A lot of dances and songs showed us different cultures. Much energy has been put into this concert: new equipment, invited presenters, a lot of missed lessons...
Catherine, a student, shared her impression: "A very vivid performance. Our students did their best to express a unique atmosphere of the Department of Foreign languages. The songs were wonderful, and dances were on the high level."
The partners of the University and the Faculty also sent their compliments to the students, professors and veterans, especially the director of The Department of human resourse and social development management "Shchekinoazot" Elena Podchufarova, represenatives of the "Unilever" company, etc.
At the end the Dean of the Department expressed his thanks to everybody and said that he is "proud for his department".
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